Doghead's Cosmic Bar

This is a science fiction character forum. Doghead's Cosmic Bar is an intergalactic bar run by your favorite bartender, Doghead. Stop in, have a drink, and get your talk on!

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21 years ago #3064
Whay are you putting commas at the end of every line like that?

21 years ago #3065
Sorry -- I meant "Why."

21 years ago #3066
No, I think you meant Whey.

21 years ago #3067
The Punctuation Fairy humbly suggests this slight edit:

We are born
Small and defenseless
Against this world.
As we grow,
We learn
How to talk
And how to play,
As mother watches
And keeps us from harm.
We grow into people
With our own thoughts,
Our own ideas;
But always we remember
The time of innocence
We had.

21 years ago #3068
As much as I love poems while drinking, maybe they could be in Seasons?

21 years ago #3069
You don't drink shady I think you may be a spy for Mario!

21 years ago #3070
The lack of mango smoothies cause Websafe to pose as the Punctuation Fairy ... Curds and whey, anyone?

21 years ago #3071
Or rather, "causes" -- get your verbs to agree with your subjects, Tallis!

21 years ago #3072
Hi, I'm a verb. nice to meet you.

21 years ago #3073
Hi! I'm a subject! I think we agree quite well.

21 years ago #3074
*restrains fingers from typing lyrics to anything that was on Schoolhouse Rock on Saturday mornings*

21 years ago #3075
I think the person writing the poems just likes to use commas. When you are writing something from the heart I don't think a person thinks about punctuation.


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