Doghead's Cosmic Bar

I just fixed several errors in there... would a few people mind going and asking him to write them a sonnet? Because I want to be sure I've caught everything. All criticism is welcome.

Again BRAVO, Watzer wrote me this one

The images are racing through my head
The tender winds reclaim my lonely soul
The fields aren't the same since you have fled
Your focus and your virtue left me cold

The mystery that hovers in your eyes
Sends radium a racing through my veins
The focus that seethes sharply in your sighs
disdains my words and sparkles like the rain

And you, my smokescreen, peaceful in your death
Have turned my life into a therapist
Assuring me that lycanthropes will rise
Reminding me that tambourines exist

When tangled in your dreams I find my soul
The time has come to tell them that we know

I like it a lot!

Great Job.

I wonder if I could get Luigi to make some lizard-based poetry...

Prob123, you have a great plan there. especially if they put it in the xnones. Since they appear to get progressively mad at you, the result would be similar. If this plan were to follow through, you would get a turring passing bot that would rivial Brother Jeromes devlopment level!

Thank you to everyone who came and talked to him; I found several more mistakes in the script.

Thank you thank you!

hats of to johanna - the first bot I've ever seen to reach a 1000+ development rating in only 2 days from creation!

Very impressive

I wouldn't mind if someone dropped my bot a line...he's over 1000 dev, but this is his first competition coming up, and I'm rather nervous.

ooo! If someone would visit me and run a judge bot like situation or two.... I'd really love it! Im so nervous about these "Judges" but my ships computer signed me up!!! EEP!

You know Din's a bot, right?

i like pie soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anybody got pie?????????

<+2>Hello<0>whats todays special?