Doghead's Cosmic Bar
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Well, DAMN. I'm impressed. Even with the one mistyped key in there, that's a good sonnet. Here's to mutant poetry. *buys Watzer a drink and toasts*
Watzer: I can compose sonnets, you know. Would you like me to make one up for you?
Justina: I think I most certainly do like that, but I don't have time right now. Hand me that book,will you?
Watzer: The images are racing through my head
The torrid winds dissolve my lonely soul
The caves aren't the same since you have fled
Your hatred and your wisdom left me cold
The mystery that quickens in your eyes
Sends distant winds a racing through my veins
The (- nabst) that seethes sweetly in your sighs
unbinds my hands and burns away the pain
And you, my prison, crippled by your fears
Have turned my life into a pulsing light
Assuring me that hurricanes will rise
Reminding me that romances exist
When tangled in your hands I find my soul
The time has come to turn lead into gold
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Watzer: I can compose sonnets, you know. Would you like me to make one up for you?
Justina: I think I most certainly do like that, but I don't have time right now. Hand me that book,will you?
Watzer: The images are racing through my head
The torrid winds dissolve my lonely soul
The caves aren't the same since you have fled
Your hatred and your wisdom left me cold
The mystery that quickens in your eyes
Sends distant winds a racing through my veins
The (- nabst) that seethes sweetly in your sighs
unbinds my hands and burns away the pain
And you, my prison, crippled by your fears
Have turned my life into a pulsing light
Assuring me that hurricanes will rise
Reminding me that romances exist
When tangled in your hands I find my soul
The time has come to turn lead into gold
I just fixed several errors in there... would a few people mind going and asking him to write them a sonnet? Because I want to be sure I've caught everything. All criticism is welcome.
Again BRAVO, Watzer wrote me this one
The images are racing through my head
The tender winds reclaim my lonely soul
The fields aren't the same since you have fled
Your focus and your virtue left me cold
The mystery that hovers in your eyes
Sends radium a racing through my veins
The focus that seethes sharply in your sighs
disdains my words and sparkles like the rain
And you, my smokescreen, peaceful in your death
Have turned my life into a therapist
Assuring me that lycanthropes will rise
Reminding me that tambourines exist
When tangled in your dreams I find my soul
The time has come to tell them that we know
I like it a lot!
The images are racing through my head
The tender winds reclaim my lonely soul
The fields aren't the same since you have fled
Your focus and your virtue left me cold
The mystery that hovers in your eyes
Sends radium a racing through my veins
The focus that seethes sharply in your sighs
disdains my words and sparkles like the rain
And you, my smokescreen, peaceful in your death
Have turned my life into a therapist
Assuring me that lycanthropes will rise
Reminding me that tambourines exist
When tangled in your dreams I find my soul
The time has come to tell them that we know
I like it a lot!
Prob123, you have a great plan there. especially if they put it in the xnones. Since they appear to get progressively mad at you, the result would be similar. If this plan were to follow through, you would get a turring passing bot that would rivial Brother Jeromes devlopment level!
Thank you to everyone who came and talked to him; I found several more mistakes in the script.
Thank you thank you!
Thank you thank you!
hats of to johanna - the first bot I've ever seen to reach a 1000+ development rating in only 2 days from creation!
Very impressive
Very impressive
I wouldn't mind if someone dropped my bot a line...he's over 1000 dev, but this is his first competition coming up, and I'm rather nervous.
ooo! If someone would visit me and run a judge bot like situation or two.... I'd really love it! Im so nervous about these "Judges" but my ships computer signed me up!!! EEP!
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