Doghead's Cosmic Bar
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The Punctuation Fairy humbly suggests this slight edit:
We are born
Small and defenseless
Against this world.
As we grow,
We learn
How to talk
And how to play,
As mother watches
And keeps us from harm.
We grow into people
With our own thoughts,
Our own ideas;
But always we remember
The time of innocence
We had.
We are born
Small and defenseless
Against this world.
As we grow,
We learn
How to talk
And how to play,
As mother watches
And keeps us from harm.
We grow into people
With our own thoughts,
Our own ideas;
But always we remember
The time of innocence
We had.
I think you may be a spy for Mario! 
The lack of mango smoothies cause Websafe to pose as the Punctuation Fairy ... Curds and whey, anyone?
*restrains fingers from typing lyrics to anything that was on Schoolhouse Rock on Saturday mornings*
I think the person writing the poems just likes to use commas. When you are writing something from the heart I don't think a person thinks about punctuation.
When you are trying to communicate with other people, however, punctuation can make a difference. Do you see what I mean.
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